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Zelda Legends - Village Square - Fan Fiction

Fan Fiction


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The Legend of Zelda: The Misinterpreted Dream

By Art1st4786
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Chapter 1: The Dream

A dark silhouette stood in front of a large, ominous statue. Getting a better look at the statue, she could tell it was of Ganondorf. Being carried in the dark silhouette's arms was a white silhouette. On the left hand of that silhouette, she could see the mark of the Triforce...the Triforce of Wisdom. The eyes on the statue began to glow a crimson red and the statue started to move, laughing maniacally with the dark silhouette.

She quickly sat up in bed, her eyes wide with fear, her skin pale, sweat dripping off her face. She quickly caught her breath and looked around. She was in her room, safe and sound. She quickly looked at her door which just opened and was comforted by the familiar face of her nursemaid.

"Princess, are you all right?" asked the nursemaid.

"I'm all right now, Impa," replied Princess Zelda. Her assuring smile quickly faded into a worried frown. "I just had a dream."

"What about?" questioned Impa. As Zelda explained to Impa what happened in her dream, the Sheikah's eyes widened slightly.

"This is serious. Someone out there intends to use you to free Ganondorf from the Sacred Realm. We can't let that happen. We're going to increase security around you to make sure nothing happens to you." Zelda nodded slightly, feeling a little bit better.

"Thank you, Impa."

"I'll watch over you tonight while you sleep." Zelda slowly nodded. Impa pulled out a small flute and started playing Zelda's Lullaby on it softly. Zelda lay back down in bed, closed her eyes, and slowly fell back to sleep.

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Comments on this chapter

Koroks Rock says:

i editted your HTML to bbcode- essentially, use brackets instead of tags in the future.

GarosAreNoProblem says:

kind of boring but then again i shouldn't be talking.oops my bad.

Anime James says:

It wasn't much of a treat to read. Word placement is an art, and quite frankly you could have chosen your words a bit better. And Impa came to that conclusion pretty darn fast; not to mention the fact that Zelda was so ready to agree with her. Overall needs work, but has promise.

achitka says:

It was very short, but has some good potential. I think you should slow dawn a bit and try to expand on your overall description...things like, what what the ambience of her room - mor than just "...She was in her room, safe and sound..." a little on the dry side. Maybe add something about the light, what her room looks like - the furnature? All sorts fo stuff to go on about. I'll have to check back in if you post more smile.gif

see ya - achitka

Link_Dream says:

short, but gets you into the story.

Art1st4786 says:

It'll pick up in the later chapsters, I promise. I've gotten great reviews on this story on the Nintendo Forums. Updates are slow because of school, but the semester is over now, so hopefully by the beginning of next semester, the whole story will be up.

ironmaiden80 says:

im already sucked in. this is a really great story. i cant wait for more. i have always wondered what happened to links parents. ive also wanted to ready a story in which zelda is the possible hero.

star_breaker says:

The chapter is short, but good storyline! So, overall, not bad, but not great. Good luck! Love your friendly nit-picking criticser star_breaker biggrin.gif